Your opinion on these character names?

I just started writing another story, and these are the names I have picked out.

Elizabeth McKenn - main character
Noah McKenn - little brother
Katherine McKenn-Delial - mom
Marcus Delial - new stepdad
Andrew Delial - new stepbrother (same age)
Emily - friend(at the beginning; Elizabeth gets new friends after)
Hanna - friend (at the beginning)
Claire - best friend (she becomes friends with Claire, and realizes that Emily and Hanna were not who she wanted to be friends with after all)

That's all I have so far. What do you think?
The plot is about Elizabeth trying to get to know Andrew, who never speaks to anyone, and always carries around a small angel figurine. She doesn't even see him until 5 days after she moves in with him.

What do you think of these names? Also, any suggestions for other names?

Comments

3 Responses to “Your opinion on these character names?”
  1. Rachel Di says:
    April 29, 2010 at 9:37 am

    Elizabeth McKenn – main character
    Elizabeth McKenn- I love the name Elizabeth. I have an Elizabeth in my novel too but she’s not very important
    Noah McKenn – little brother- I like this name too
    Katherine McKenn-Delial – mom- I love the name Katherine
    Marcus Delial – new stepdad- Marcus is okay
    Andrew Delial – new stepbrother (same age)- I’m not fond of Andrew but it’s alright
    Emily – friend(at the beginning; Elizabeth gets- new friends after)- I love Emily
    Hanna – friend (at the beginning)- I like Hannah
    Claire – best friend (she becomes friends with Claire, and realizes that Emily and Hanna were not who she wanted to be friends with after all)- I love Claire.

    Wow I like the names in your novel better than mine, especially my second.

  2. dontcachfire says:
    April 29, 2010 at 9:37 am

    Randy (new friend)
    Patric (new friend)
    Holly (new non-friend)
    Jeremy (new boyfriend)

  3. Jett says:
    April 29, 2010 at 9:37 am

    Hate the last name Delial. It sounds like Denial.
    Don’t make the mother have McKenn-Delial. It just sounds so stupid. (Sorry to be rude).
    Please add a Jack. I love the name Jack.
    Emily Hanna Claire is so common, it’s trite. It’s awful. Almost every teenyboppy story I read it’s Emily Hanna Claire. Dumb. Just Dumb.

    Sorry to be rude!!!! I’m just giving you really hard criticism so you don’t have to go through worse.

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