Please help me name this! I want to submit it to Young Writer's Society!?

The story is about a teenage girl, Elizabeth, who is going through a hard time because 4 months ago her parents divorced, and her mother is already re-marrying. After living in her new home (it's a mansion; her new stepdad is rich) for a week, she discovers that she actually has a stepbrother, Andrew. She first sees him at school, before she knows he is her stepbrother, and her new friend Emilie describes him as a nerd, because he doesn't speak, and he always wears an angel figurine around his neck. After trying to get to know Andrew, he tells Elizabeth the horrible story of how his mom died. The day after his 8th birthday (which his mom gave him an angel figurine), him and his mom stay home due to the flu. His crazy aunt comes to visit, locks herself in a room with her sister, kills Andrew's mom in a fit of anger, realized what she had done, and killed herself. She also finds out later that Andrew has a younger sister, who was put in a foster home at age 3 when her mom died, because she looked identical to her mom. The story is about Elizabeth getting to know Andrew and helping him, and in the end, she brings Aliana (his sister) home.

Please help me name it!

So sorry it's so long!

Also, does it sound good?

Comments

5 Responses to “Please help me name this! I want to submit it to Young Writer's Society!?”
  1. Sar says:
    April 26, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    At first it seemed drab, like all the other stupid stories, but all the deaths added action to your story, which I liked. Here’s some random title ideas I thought up:
    -Hidden Angel
    -Journey Home

    I don’t really know.

  2. Allison. says:
    April 26, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    i have no idea what you can name it
    andrew? figurine?
    i dont know,

    but i would definitely read that book, it sounds amazing.

  3. ogalaga says:
    April 26, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    Really good and original. name: tricky. hers a few you might try:
    MOTHER
    ANGEL
    FINDING
    THE SEARCH
    RESCUE
    ANDREW
    please also answer mine

  4. Emi says:
    April 26, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    The Long Road would be a perfect title.

  5. dRiFtEr says:
    April 26, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    Yeah that does sound good!
    Sorry I can’t help with the submitting to Young Writer’s Society

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