http://www.mycrystalfigurines.com/could-you-help-me-with-my-short-story Mon, 16 Jan 2012 00:03:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.mycrystalfigurines.com/could-you-help-me-with-my-short-story/comment-page-1#comment-561 Monica Tue, 30 Mar 2010 13:20:48 +0000 http://www.mycrystalfigurines.com/could-you-help-me-with-my-short-story#comment-561 Its good but if you want some feedback it was kinda boring through the middle. maybe spice it up some? thanks for answering mine by the way haha Its good but if you want some feedback it was kinda boring through the middle. maybe spice it up some? thanks for answering mine by the way haha

]]>